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Agent M79
06-06-2004, 10:36 AM
It was a somewhat overcast day in the NC. The sun was condemned behind just enough nimbus that shadows cast were vague and without definition.

I found myself, as I often do, at one of the most insidiously competitive automotive combat arenas in the area. They’d all be there vying for the prize: Double-winged ricers, old school factory iron, European brands of every vintage and economic station, and soccer-mom-mobiles. Each one aggressive, some completely reckless and seemingly oblivious to danger. But each one of us tied inexorably to a single-minded goal. Win.

Those few of us with the skill, timing, capability, and correct blend of power and handling usually win. Not strictly a straight-line race, there are twists, turns, fixed obstacles, and moving, darting obstacles. Each challenge designed by itself to prevent you from your goal in addition to the intense competition from the other drivers. This is a high-stakes, winner-take-all environment. It’s the adrenaline induced thrill-stress that brings us there.

We are tied together in intense competition for the top honors: The best parking spot at Food Lion.

I remember her eyes. Cold. I could swear there were ice crystals forming around the edges of her eye lids. That piercing icicle stare stabbed into me even through our layers of safety glass and enough space for ten cars. Though her eyes were intense motes, I could see her silhouette. The sensible bob hair do, the practical yet attractive blouse. She had all the marks of a worthy and competent adversary.

I wanted to turn away, to avoid having to acknowledge her. I admit it. I was afraid. But I swallowed my fear and subtly raised my head to indicate my acceptance of the challenge.

The plastic chromed “H” impressed in the middle of the grill gleamed back at me from the bulbous hood space of her Odyssey. No doubt the upright arms of the “H” would be tipping back and forth with each stab of her foot on the accelerator if it wasn’t for the fact that all 6 of her fire buckets were mounted transversely.

I am a competitor. I saw the competition and I saw what we were competing for. This spot was a five star spot. Highly sought after because of it’s close proximity to either front door but far enough from the cart collector to minimize stray cart damage. Those instantaneous calculations took place in my head… distance… needed acceleration… arcs and apexes, current and impending obstacles. The contest was afoot.

Our eyes meet once more and I could tell from the slight squint she put on those ice lasers of hers she had arrived at the same conclusion that I did. We were now locked into the struggle that has played out since lines were put onto pavement where people would leave there cars for various periods of time. That timeless contest of skill, speed, and finesse that puts your vehicle in a space equidistant from three painted lines laid out in a continuous interlocking field of rectangular slots.

Time seemingly slowed at the very moment we committed to the contest. My foot, a blur in real time, slowing lifted from the brake pedal and began it’s pivot over to the gas for a measured feathering to about 1/8<SUP>th</SUP> throttle. The sight I saw through my windshield midway between the peddles curdled my stomach and tested my resolve. Through her cavernous driver side window I could see it. Moving from some unseen cubby or cranny those hellspawn vehicles are notorious for, she had grasped in her ice claws a shiny faux-chrome cladded cell phone. Collecting more than the available light, it gleamed and twinkled at me only adding to the icy pain from her stare.

She raised the stakes. My humiliation would have no boundaries if I lost now.

She would have to make a left wide sweeper to get into the aisle and hang a right to get her nose into the spot. I, already in the aisle, needed only to bear closer to the right hand side of the aisle to make the sharp left into the space. While technically I had more space to travel, I had less wheel work to do.

As her van began its body-roll induced heave over on the right side as she spun the steering wheel with one hand, my MM’s front end raised slightly from the power I unleashed by partially mashing the go-slab under my right foot. I was easing gently to the right when I was dealt my first obstacle.

The ’92 Olds Custom Cruiser wagon had lurched from it’s stable on the right 3 spots ahead of me. Having not noticed my rapid transit down the aisle until after moving about a quarter of its length, it stopped abruptly and ponderously lunged back on it haunches. The driver’s weak apologetic wave only producing a sneer on my face and I swerved around it. This maneuver was enough to have interrupted the poetry of the arc I had set up but more importantly had distracted me from my quarry.

I could hardly believe it! Instead of setting herself up to nose into the spot we were locked in eternal combat for she was heading straight down the middle of the aisle passing the spot but more importantly barreling straight for me! Under most circumstances this would resolve without incident but her attention was divided by her cell phone and not divided evenly. Those icy stabbers were starring blankly somewhere into her dashboard as my fear reached a fever pitch.


End Part 1... Part 2 posted next

Agent M79
06-06-2004, 10:37 AM
Almost as if in concert and coordinated by mysterious forces outside of us, both of our vehicles stopped at the same rate of speed, the front ends dipping an identical amount as if some vehicular ballet was playing out. My breath caught as we came within mere yards of each other. Then, in the same motion, the minivan began moving away from me in reverse. It wasn’t until she began spinning her wheel around to aim the back end of the battle wagon into *my* spot that she looked up at me. Her steely eyes stabbed back into mine with sadistic joy that only a blood thirsty psychopathic predator could generate.

My abject shame rose as bile from my stomach. I was humiliated. I let my foot off of the brake and let the car idle past her as she put the van in park. I put my head down and slinked past. Heading over to the next aisle where there were many available but less prominent slots.

As I left the aisle, defeated, to head over to big-fat-losers row, my cell phone rang. I wasn’t sure I could answer it. The pain of my humiliation may carry though the airwaves to the caller and they would know… they would know the depths of my new self-loathing. I gathered myself.

“Hello.” I said in a shame crackled voice.

“Where are you!?” my wife exclaimed excitedly to me.

The shame, so fresh, continued to well forth.

“I just got to the store.” I sighed.

“I’m already here, don’t worry about it.” She said as I heard her door slam and the click-click-click of her sensible shoes over the cell phone.

“Yeah… well… I’m here to so I’ll just join you.” I said dejectedly as I stepped from my MM.

As I pressed the lock button on my fob, my eyes traced up and towards the area of my complete and utter humiliation and fixed on that which was cause for my despair. Looking out over a sea of anonymous cars, it sat there. I could hear it ticking as it cooled down. The van… the *mini* van and its huge headlights were there, smug in self-satisfaction. And there… there in the focal point of my humiliation was she, the pilot princess with the eyes of ice who out-maneuvered me and dealt me an unparalleled disgrace.

“Oh! Hey! I see you!” my wife’s voice called from my cell phone as the dismounted mini-van driver waved to me joyously across the lot.

“IT’S YOU!” I screamed into the phone.

“Uh… yeah!?” she said cautiously.

My jaw idiot-locked open as I slowly pulled the phone from my ear and closed the flip top.

She walked towards me and I moved forward. Once half the distance was closed, I could see a small wry smile on her face.

“I got out a little early and thought I’d take care of the shopping. I was just calling to let you know you didn’t need to stop.” She said angling towards the front of the store.

I reached for her hand, taking it perhaps just a little too firmly. If she detected it, she didn’t acknowledge it, but I didn’t expect her too.

“How was your day?” She asked as the doors parted for us and the rush of cool air hit our faces.

“Eh… you know. Just another day.”

I silently wept in aisle 7 next to the 2 for 1 Captain Crunch.


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Marauderman
06-06-2004, 10:54 AM
uh....Dave----you been talking to BillyG behind our backs...... :lol: ......

Agent M79
06-06-2004, 05:57 PM
uh....Dave----you been talking to BillyG behind our backs...... :lol: ......
Naw, I'm just an edgy that way.

01 Interceptor
06-06-2004, 06:21 PM
You have a great way with words! It was an enjoyable story. Sorry that your wife 0wned you though. :D

BillyGman
06-06-2004, 06:35 PM
uh....Dave----you been talking to BillyG behind our backs...... :lol: ......Naw, we haven't talked at all even via PM for awhile. But I guess he's made a very good point w/his story.....and that is that these are the kinds of stories that many members want around here. If that's what makes your pacemaker skip a beat, than more power to ya(yawn). I guess I shoud go to the "Bed & Bath" store w/the women for excitement like undoubtedly many other members here must do........ Excellent point M79.:up:

I'm sure this is the type of story guys like "MarauderJack" thrives on.:rolleyes:

Agent M79
06-06-2004, 07:05 PM
Really now. I didn't write that as some object lesson or anything. Yes, it is meant to be tongue-in-cheek and all and kinda poke fun at how serious we can be at times but that's the limit of its very generic commentary.

It wasn't posted because of the street racing stories possibly being banned thread at all. Just an unfortunate coincidence.

I had fun writing it. It was meant in fun. I laughed when I was writing it, laughed when I proofed it, and laughed a couple of more times afer I posted it. In the end, I may be the only one entertained by it. I still am.




Naw, we haven't talked at all even via PM for awhile. But I guess he's made a very good point w/his story.....and that is that these are the kinds of stories that many members want around here. If that's what makes your pacemaker skip a beat, than more power to ya(yawn). I guess I shoud go to the "Bed & Bath" store w/the women for excitement like undoubtedly many other members here must do........ Excellent point M79.:up:

I'm sure this is the type of story guys like "MarauderJack" thrives on.:rolleyes:

MICA Racing
06-06-2004, 07:59 PM
:baaa: :baaa: :baaa: :baaa: :baaa: That's the funniest thing I've read all week!!

Haggis
06-09-2004, 06:15 AM
Agent you have a way with words that's hard to describe. But, we all know you let your wife beat you to that space, better to keep peace in the family then to argue over a mere Parking space.

Marauder386
06-09-2004, 09:18 AM
That is an OUTSTANDING piece of writing ! May I print and distribute it at work ?? ROFLMAO... :up: :up: :up: :up: :up: :up:


M386


< still giggling all curled up in the fetal position >

Agent M79
06-09-2004, 09:26 AM
That is an OUTSTANDING piece of writing ! May I print and distribute it at work ?? ROFLMAO... :up: :up: :up: :up: :up: :up:


M386


< still giggling all curled up in the fetal position >
My wife read it and said it was really funny too. I think that may be the only time I may be allowed to refer to her in this context "...with sadistic joy that only a blood thirsty psychopathic predator could generate..."


Feel free to copy as you like.

Bluerauder
06-14-2004, 11:34 AM
"...snip...." Those icy stabbers were starring blankly somewhere into her dashboard as my fear reached a fever pitch.[/font]


End Part 1... Part 2 posted next
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Missed this on the original post date while travelling. Excellent story ... and very well written. :up: Loved the ending. :eek: Pretty funny in a tongue and cheek kinda way. Ah yes, the Parking Spot derby ........at the grocery store. Been there ... done that. Now I park in the North 40 and walk.